20.12.08
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Dear Ben! .
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How are you? Are you doing fine? I'm sorry I didn't write in such a long time I was busy. Lately I have had sleeping problems. I can't sleep! I thought it would be nice to share it with you.

It happened two weeks ago. It was dark. I was coming back from work. At that time my car was broken so i had to walk. Suddenly, I noticed that someone is(gr. - was) stalking me. I panicked and started walking faster but unfortunately, so did he. After 2 minutes of this chase he caught me.

I was robbed! Can you believe it? He was holding a knife and threat (gr. - use the past) to kill me. I tried to convince him to let me go just like you see in the movies but it didn't work. He was determined. Obviously I had to cooperate with him and give him all my money. I did go to the police and they caught him and brought my money back. In fact it was on the same day.

Even though I know that the thief is locked down I can't sleep.The doctor said it's just a matter of time till I calm down and my life will be the same as ever. Of one thing i'm sure, I do miss you!
Hope to see you soon!
Eden Pesach !

Good work, Eden. There are still a few grammar mistakes, confusing the past with the present.
Daphna.

4th

Clocks
A particularly old invention , however it is still used and even developed along the years.
The pocket clock was invented in the 16 century and has developed throughout time to a several types of clocks . The most common clocks are the Wall Clock and the Hand Watch.

The Wall Clock
It is a hanged clock usually on the wall and sometimes on top of towers and in public places, such as the Big Bang in London. This kind of clock was invented in the 17 century by Galileo Galile and was first built with pendulum at the bottom of the clock. The clock could easily "find out" what time is it by using the pendulum cyclic motion to measure a certain time usually in seconds.

The Hand Watch
It was invented at the beginning of the 20th century and was designed in a way that allow to wear it on your hand which will allow you to know what time is it at any certain moment. Comparing to the Wall Clock this watch is very cheap and contains an electronic system. This watch is mass product because of his many ups such as , small , cheap , doesn't cost so much power (electricity) and efficient.




The sources of my work :

http://he.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D7%A9%D7%A2%D7%95%D7%9F_%D7%99%D7%93

http://he.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D7%A9%D7%A2%D7%95%D7%9F#.D7.A6.D7.99.D7.95.D7.A0.D7.99_.D7.93.D7.A8.D7.9A_.D7.91.D7.94.D7.AA.D7.A4.D7.AA.D7.97.D7.95.D7.AA_.D7.94.D7.A9.D7.A2.D7.95.D7.9F

3rd

The place i'm about to describe is the hotel Amara. This hotel is a huge castle I might say with very big decorated buildings and it is the perfect hotel for a vacation. It is one of the finest hotels in Turkey , Anatolia . It's big and fancy and it has many pools and much more activities which I will expend later on.

During the summer holidays me, my aunt and her daughter went on a vacation to this astounding palace. I remember at my first day there I took a walk exploring the hotel , I could have easily get lost , this palace was huge. An enormous amazing lobby , and long wide halls that lead to the main pool area which is near the beach. The hotel itself has many activities such as swimming , playing pool , bowling , tennis , soccer , basket ball , video games and so on. In spite of the activities for "children" there are also many bars, restaurant of many kinds and a spa.

I didn't even start to describe this hotel because it is so big and fabulous and there are so many things to do. Even I, while spending a week there, didn't find all the activities that the hotel offers . I can't recommend of any other perfect vacation place and I truly hope you will visit it and enjoy as much as I did.

It's very good, although you're not saying much about the place, other than how grand and fabulous it is. But I guess that's all you come up with when decribing a hotel. So, on the whole, your work is very good.

Daphna.

My 2nd assigment

I’m about to tell you a little bit about my close friend Amir. He is a good friend to me and I’d like to describe him so you could know him slightly better. He has many hobies which I like to tell you about.

Amir is tall and thin, he has dark brown eyes and a brown curly hair. In addition, he is very kind, nice , and he always helps you when you need him and he has great advices too. Although sometimes he can be very busy, he will always find time to hang out with his friends.

Amir has many hobbies, he plays tennis really good , he paints , he writes and he even learns Japanese. Farther more, Amir likes watching movies, especially anime and series like “The Office” and “House” and he loves cats.

To sum up I believe that he will be a well known writer,he will have a best seller and he will succeed in everything. I hope we will always be friends and we will keep in touch and play a friendly tennis game once in a while.

My First Assigment

My name is Eden Pessach i'm 15 years old and I study at "Kugel" high school.

Let me tell you about my self.
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I have brown hair and brown eyes. I have a big family, I have 2 brothers that are bigger than me. One of them is in the army and the other is a few mounths away from being drafted. I'm the third child of my family , and after me my sister was born. She is 10 years old and studies in the 5th grade at "Ben Zvi" elementry school. I like her but sometimes she can be very annoying.
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further more, I have many hobbies. I like playing basketball ,computer games, hanging out with friends and swimming. In addition, I also like going to school and meeting my friends everyday. My most favorite class in school is English . In English class my mean teacher usually gives lots of home works but at least we still read interesting stories.
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To sum up I hope that along this year things will get better And I hope I will be attend for the moudle E matriculation exams.I will try hard to improve my grades and will be proud of my achievements.

LaLa!

LALAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!

.Notice how well i express my self