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The place i'm about to describe is the hotel Amara. This hotel is a huge castle I might say with very big decorated buildings and it is the perfect hotel for a vacation. It is one of the finest hotels in Turkey , Anatolia . It's big and fancy and it has many pools and much more activities which I will expend later on.

During the summer holidays me, my aunt and her daughter went on a vacation to this astounding palace. I remember at my first day there I took a walk exploring the hotel , I could have easily get lost , this palace was huge. An enormous amazing lobby , and long wide halls that lead to the main pool area which is near the beach. The hotel itself has many activities such as swimming , playing pool , bowling , tennis , soccer , basket ball , video games and so on. In spite of the activities for "children" there are also many bars, restaurant of many kinds and a spa.

I didn't even start to describe this hotel because it is so big and fabulous and there are so many things to do. Even I, while spending a week there, didn't find all the activities that the hotel offers . I can't recommend of any other perfect vacation place and I truly hope you will visit it and enjoy as much as I did.

It's very good, although you're not saying much about the place, other than how grand and fabulous it is. But I guess that's all you come up with when decribing a hotel. So, on the whole, your work is very good.

Daphna.