20.12.08
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Dear Ben! .
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How are you? Are you doing fine? I'm sorry I didn't write in such a long time I was busy. Lately I have had sleeping problems. I can't sleep! I thought it would be nice to share it with you.

It happened two weeks ago. It was dark. I was coming back from work. At that time my car was broken so i had to walk. Suddenly, I noticed that someone is(gr. - was) stalking me. I panicked and started walking faster but unfortunately, so did he. After 2 minutes of this chase he caught me.

I was robbed! Can you believe it? He was holding a knife and threat (gr. - use the past) to kill me. I tried to convince him to let me go just like you see in the movies but it didn't work. He was determined. Obviously I had to cooperate with him and give him all my money. I did go to the police and they caught him and brought my money back. In fact it was on the same day.

Even though I know that the thief is locked down I can't sleep.The doctor said it's just a matter of time till I calm down and my life will be the same as ever. Of one thing i'm sure, I do miss you!
Hope to see you soon!
Eden Pesach !

Good work, Eden. There are still a few grammar mistakes, confusing the past with the present.
Daphna.