Thursday, January 22, 2009

An advice letter

22\01\09

Dear Janet!

I heard your dilemma and I think I can help you. I know you are probably confused and I hope my advice will help you. You have a lot of friends and some of them want to copy from you in tests. The problem is that you get nervous and your grades are getting down because your friends copy from you. Well, I believe the solution is quite simple.

In fact your dilemma is either helping your friends cheat, which effects your grades, or not. I think that you should find out who your real friends are . I'm certain that your real friends wouldn't want to do anything that would effect your grades for the worst.

You should explain to your friends the situation and tell them that you can't let them cheat anymore. Anyone who won't be your friend after that, doesn't deserve to be your friend because he is only copying for his own interest and success and doesn't really care about you.

Although it might sound not very friendly, I'm sure all of your friends will understand. Be Brave! Well, I hope my advice will help you in your dilemma and you will succeed in your tests.
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Let me know how it goes
yours sincerely,
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Eden


Much-much better, Eden. Well done! (90)
Daphna.


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Thursday, January 8, 2009

The War in Gaza!

I live in Holon, so the war doesn't really effect me, and I can't even start to imagine what it is like to live in fear. Being striken by Kassams casually for 8 years! Always waiting for the next alert to be heard.Buildings ruined, shrads everywhere.Finally Israel is taking action. Every country has the right to protect it self and now after 8 long years we have.I do believe we have to overpower the Hamas and I know a military action is needed but in spite of that I'm worried about our soldiers' lives.I wrote this paragraph to show my support to the Israeli initiative and I hope the war will be over soon and finally we will have peace in the middle east.