Space exploration

Nowadays technology has progressed beyond any limits, actually beyond the boundaries of earth.Space exploration has developed over the years and started being the reason of the human kind will to expand the knowledge of humanity.Every once in a while a huge company of space exploration launches a single space shuttle to space that costs billions dollars.

On the one hand, space exploration has helped humanity to create and improve many things in everyones life such as satellite TV and Mobiles. Thanks to space exploration many people have jobs in this field and the quantity of unemployment has gotten lower. In addition, we also expand the boundaries of earth and acquiring new resources.

On the other hand, space exploration is a negative thing. Every few months a space shuttle is launched into space and it costs billions of dollars.Every shuttle that launches leaves behind a huge amount of pollution that damages the earth. Every country tries to be the most advanced and therefore they spend huge amounts of money on space exploration, instead of improving the life quality of their people.

In conclusion, I believe space exploration is a positive thing that developed our quality of life and I believe it should expand along the years. It has many advantages and all countries should support and develop it. My dream is that in a few hundred years we will be living on the moon.

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Daphna.

I'v fixed it please check agian.