Healthy food, what is it good for? Apparently more than we thought. According to a new study, healthy food reduces aggressive behavior. Amazingly , if we ate healthy food we would be more relaxed , and our entire way of life would change. Almost every food manufacture makes unhealthy food. I believe food manufacturers should be held responsible for their products, but we should also notice what food we eat. Which means it's not entirly thier fault.
The study made about eating healthy food showed that students who ate healthier food improved their grades. It is the parents' job to take care and watch what their children are eating. Unfortunately, at school for example, students have to eat their school lunches. If schools and many places that sell food made it healthier, we could live in a more peaceful place.
Moreover, it isn't entirely the food manufacturers' fault. People should pay attention and take care of what they eat. Most of the food we eat isn't healthy and it's the food manufacturers' job to include a description of the ingredients.
In conclusion, there are two sides to the coin, we can't expect food manufacturers to take care of what we eat if we don't. Who is to blame? Answering this question can take hours , but most important is to learn a lesson out of this study. We should take care of our selves from now on and watch what we eat.
Wednesday, September 23, 2009
Wednesday, September 16, 2009
Formal letter
132 Fleetwood Street
Ashville
September 17, 2009
The Editor
Around Town
P.O. Box 52
Ashville
Dear Editor,
Referring the article "Look who's talking" , I would like to express my support for Ruth Selwyn.
I admire her ambition uploading those series of videos called "Lizzy The Lezzy" .I believe it helped a lot of women all over the world and even made many people laugh.
To begin with, Ruth took action and made those videos for women like her , to help them understand the lesbian way of life. As you said, she did get to the hearts of people through humor and she deserves all of the supporting comments from the surfers.
I believe many people will agree with me that Ruth deserve all the support she can get. The beauty of Lizzy is that she is direct and sincere. In my opinion, you should publish more articles about Selwyn , in order to advertise her work and help her influence many other people's lives.
In conclusion, I believe you have done a wonderful job writing this article about Ruth Selwyn , but it is not enough and with a little effort, her videos might get more publicity. Who knows, maybe in a few years she will have her own show.
Yours truly ,
Eden Pessah
Good work, Eden. However, you have some rephrasing to do and please pay attention to punctuation.
(87)
Daphna
Ashville
September 17, 2009
The Editor
Around Town
P.O. Box 52
Ashville
Dear Editor,
Referring the article "Look who's talking" , I would like to express my support for Ruth Selwyn.
I admire her ambition uploading those series of videos called "Lizzy The Lezzy" .I believe it helped a lot of women all over the world and even made many people laugh.
To begin with, Ruth took action and made those videos for women like her , to help them understand the lesbian way of life. As you said, she did get to the hearts of people through humor and she deserves all of the supporting comments from the surfers.
I believe many people will agree with me that Ruth deserve all the support she can get. The beauty of Lizzy is that she is direct and sincere. In my opinion, you should publish more articles about Selwyn , in order to advertise her work and help her influence many other people's lives.
In conclusion, I believe you have done a wonderful job writing this article about Ruth Selwyn , but it is not enough and with a little effort, her videos might get more publicity. Who knows, maybe in a few years she will have her own show.
Yours truly ,
Eden Pessah
Good work, Eden. However, you have some rephrasing to do and please pay attention to punctuation.
(87)
Daphna
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
Is Face Book banned?
Recently Syria banned face book in order to reclaim the Golan Heights.The cause of this is Face Book permitting Israeli people from the Golan Heights to list "Israel" as their residence country. In addition, Damascus joined the protest by banning Face Book and Even Youtube.
Through Face Book Israeli users can talk and chat to Syrian ones .It is not welcomed by Syria.It happens everyday , people from Israel contacting people from Syria , eventually Syria decided to take action and it is not alone.By doing so
Damascus and Syria prevent its citizens from communicating with other people over the world and reaching basic universal information.
In my opinion, preventing from people information , to censor, is wrong and should be forbidden. Those countries are denying their citizens from the freedom of knowledge. Sealing them in a bubble away from the rest of the world, concludes in people living in total blackness from the rest of the world.
To sum up, Syria actually has taken a stand against its own citizens, denying their rights for the sake of political reasons. I see in this act the worse way to handle the situation because the government denies its citizens the most basic right they deserve.
http://www.haaretz.com/hasen/spages/1114725.html
Excellent.
(100)
Daphna.
Through Face Book Israeli users can talk and chat to Syrian ones .It is not welcomed by Syria.It happens everyday , people from Israel contacting people from Syria , eventually Syria decided to take action and it is not alone.By doing so
Damascus and Syria prevent its citizens from communicating with other people over the world and reaching basic universal information.In my opinion, preventing from people information , to censor, is wrong and should be forbidden. Those countries are denying their citizens from the freedom of knowledge. Sealing them in a bubble away from the rest of the world, concludes in people living in total blackness from the rest of the world.
To sum up, Syria actually has taken a stand against its own citizens, denying their rights for the sake of political reasons. I see in this act the worse way to handle the situation because the government denies its citizens the most basic right they deserve.
http://www.haaretz.com/hasen/spages/1114725.html
Excellent.
(100)
Daphna.
Thursday, September 10, 2009
Lizzy The Lezzy
Lizzy the Lezzy is a funny lesbian cartoon character that appears on a series of videos on Youtube. She talks about the lesbian way of life, helping other lesbian women all over the world to reveal and to be proud of their sexual identity. Lizzy's videos on youtube are high rated and have a massive amount of views by surfers.
Lizzy's creator "Ruth Selwyn" intented helping people to be more aware and understanding of the gay comunity. Selwyn, as a lesbian her self , had trouble solving her sexual identity. She has decided to uplaod a series of videos to Youtube. Further more, many people from all over the world love those hilarious videos and support Selwyn's cause.
I believe those videos are important. They have helped so many people either to understand or to be more liberal and open minded. Lizzy is direct, which contributes a lot to the nature of the clips. In addition, I'm positive that Lizzy will be a success , one of the many that managed to enrich our knowledge through humor.
In conclusion, Selwyn is acting for the things she believes in and succeded(gr.). By doing so she helped many people all over the world. Selwyn use(gr.) humor to get to the people's hearts ,thus achieving her goal. If we all stand for what we believe in, the world can be a better place.
Very good work. I liked it very much!
(100)
Daphna.
** All said directly or indirectly doesn't effect or represent Eden's Pessah point of view .
The article:
http://www.jpost.com/servlet/Satellite?cid=1251804481208&pagename=JPost%2FJPArticle%2FShowFull
Youtube clip :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z17UGsq-4wc
Lizzy's creator "Ruth Selwyn" intented helping people to be more aware and understanding of the gay comunity. Selwyn, as a lesbian her self , had trouble solving her sexual identity. She has decided to uplaod a series of videos to Youtube. Further more, many people from all over the world love those hilarious videos and support Selwyn's cause.
I believe those videos are important. They have helped so many people either to understand or to be more liberal and open minded. Lizzy is direct, which contributes a lot to the nature of the clips. In addition, I'm positive that Lizzy will be a success , one of the many that managed to enrich our knowledge through humor.
In conclusion, Selwyn is acting for the things she believes in and succeded(gr.). By doing so she helped many people all over the world. Selwyn use(gr.) humor to get to the people's hearts ,thus achieving her goal. If we all stand for what we believe in, the world can be a better place.
Very good work. I liked it very much!
(100)
Daphna.
** All said directly or indirectly doesn't effect or represent Eden's Pessah point of view .
The article:
http://www.jpost.com/servlet/Satellite?cid=1251804481208&pagename=JPost%2FJPArticle%2FShowFull
Youtube clip :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z17UGsq-4wc
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