Formal letter

132 Fleetwood Street
Ashville
September 17, 2009

The Editor
Around Town
P.O. Box 52
Ashville

Dear Editor,

Referring the article "Look who's talking" , I would like to express my support for Ruth Selwyn.
I admire her ambition uploading those series of videos called "Lizzy The Lezzy" .I believe it helped a lot of women all over the world and even made many people laugh.

To begin with, Ruth took action and made those videos for women like her , to help them understand the lesbian way of life. As you said, she did get to the hearts of people through humor and she deserves all of the supporting comments from the surfers.

I believe many people will agree with me that Ruth deserve all the support she can get. The beauty of Lizzy is that she is direct and sincere. In my opinion, you should publish more articles about Selwyn , in order to advertise her work and help her influence many other people's lives.

In conclusion, I believe you have done a wonderful job writing this article about Ruth Selwyn , but it is not enough and with a little effort, her videos might get more publicity. Who knows, maybe in a few years she will have her own show.

Yours truly ,

Eden Pessah

Good work, Eden. However, you have some rephrasing to do and please pay attention to punctuation.
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Daphna