Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Do you have the money?

12 Ilan Street
Holon
December 2, 2009

Ms. Gilat Simon
Principal
Kugel high school
22 Broad Street
Holon

Dear Ms. Gilat Simon,

I am writing because I wish to complain about the cost of the trip to Poland offered by our school. This trip is an important custom because we honor and understand the horror of the 20th century.This custom has existed for many years now. Nowadays, less and less students can afford to go on this journey.

First of all, This trip is so expensive, which is why most of the students and their parents can't afford it.Therefore, it goes with out saying that most of the students ,who truly want to take part in this trip, just can't.

Second, the school hasn't prepared us very well for the trip. The hotel was embarrassing and there was not enough food. It was freezing. We could not enjoy our trip due to all those factors, that disrupted us.

In conclusion, I am very disappointed from this trip. It was supposed to be an enhancing experience, that everyone should have enjoyed, but instead, it became an overpriced trip that embarrassed those who did go on it.The trip was a failure, we couldn't enjoy it.

I suggest you lower the price of the trip.I look forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Eden Pessah.

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