About the tour

(12) Ilan 12(מיותר) Street

Haifa

April 22, 2010

See the World

Biber 3(wo. - 3 Biber) Street

New-York

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter in order to request information about the organized tour to the United States. I am 16 and I like to be in the nature(phr.). My ideal trip is walking in a forest near a river.

I am interested in an educational tour. I am really interested in art so i would like to visit several museums and also do lots of hiking. In addition, I like to do(ww. - take part in) some extreme activities, such as surfing, sky diving and more.

I would like to know how much does(מיותר) this tour cost(s) and where are(מיותר) we(who is "we") (are) going to spend the nights.It is said in your website that this tour is a 7 days(מיותר) tour. Can the tour be longer or include more activities as I listed above?

I Hope you will regard my letter and answer it as soon as possible. I am really excited about this tour, I hope this tour would(gr. - will) be and experience of a life time and that I will enjoy every second of it.

Yours Truly,

Ed Gal

(87)

Daphna

Radio teen programs

12 Ilan Street
Haifa
April 8,2010

Radio Station Manager
The Voice Of Israel
24 Bareket Street
Holon

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter due to your request for program ideas. I am advising you to launch a new program regarding pets. I believe a show regarding pets will attract much more listeners and thus your radio station will become more popular.

The program will include interesting information about different kinds of pets. In addition, teens will be able to call the radio show and ask the zoologist about all kind of problems they are having with their pets and ask for advice.

I am sure this program will be extremely popular, because almost every one out of two teenagers has a pet. Furthermore, I have only met a few people in my life that aren't interested in pets.

I hope you will seriously consider my suggestion, I am sure you will not regret it if you choose to produce my show. Either way, I wish you luck with making your radio show more popular among teenagers.


Sincerely yours,
Ed Gal

This is better. Although I wasn't supposed to recheck this task, I did. Your grade now is: 87
Daphna