Saturday, September 4, 2010

Knowledge is not easy to measure – (Unit 8)

A common belief is that nowadays matriculation exams are the most reliable way of testing a student's knowledge. Students all over the country are tested each year in several Bagrut exams on their success in answering a few questions in various topics(phr.) such as chemistry, mathematics, history and much more(ww. - others). While some believe Bagrut exams are the best indication of knowledge, I believe that it is not correct.

For instance, each year a Mikud is published. The Mikud limits the amount of topics each year students are tested on in a Bagrut exam. Students can pass the tests without knowing several topics. Each year students are tested on different subjects. Therefore, those tests cannot possibly measure knowledge if each year students are tested on different subjects. Meaning different students can get different grades in the same subject without studying the same topics.

Furthermore, each Bagrut exam is a single exam. In other words, student's knowledge in a subject is measured in a single test, which they can easily fail due to many reasons, that have no connection to their knowledge. Thus even the most intelligent student can fail that so claimed "knowledge test" just because of feeling sick or having a blackout while answering the test.

In conclusion, the matriculation exams are not the best way of measuring knowledge. In my opinion, in order to measure knowledge there should hold research papers(phr.), which measure not only the theoretical knowledge that can be learned by heart, but also how well students implement their knowledge.

This is better. Good work.

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Daphna

Do you play alone? - (unit 1)

Some people prefer team sports while others prefer individual sports. Both of these kinds of sport have several advantages and disadvantages. Personally, I prefer the former especially because of two main advantages of it(מיותר).

First, team sports encourage subliminally and initially the improvement of each individual involved with this kind of sports. In other words, team sports automatically create a competitive environment between those who (are)involved in several team sports(phr. - not clear what you mean). For example, I and my friend(wo. - my friend and I) play soccer together. Although he is out of shape, he keeps up and doesn't quit just because he wants to help our team win.

Second, persistence is very important when it comes to sport. When an individual is involved in team sports it is much easier for him to be diligent in this sport because he is not alone. Meaning, he has several more team mates which(ww. - who) will help in any difficulty he may face.

In conclusion, I believe that team sports are better than individual ones, since you can enjoy the company of others while doing sports, which helps you persist in the sport and make you improve significantly as well(This is a run-on sentence). That is why team sports are superior to individual sports.

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Daphna