Some people prefer team sports while others prefer individual sports. Both of these kinds of sport have several advantages and disadvantages. Personally, I prefer the former especially because of two main advantages of it(מיותר).
First, team sports encourage subliminally and initially the improvement of each individual involved with this kind of sports. In other words, team sports automatically create a competitive environment between those who (are)involved in several team sports(phr. - not clear what you mean). For example, I and my friend(wo. - my friend and I) play soccer together. Although he is out of shape, he keeps up and doesn't quit just because he wants to help our team win.
Second, persistence is very important when it comes to sport. When an individual is involved in team sports it is much easier for him to be diligent in this sport because he is not alone. Meaning, he has several more team mates which(ww. - who) will help in any difficulty he may face.
In conclusion, I believe that team sports are better than individual ones, since you can enjoy the company of others while doing sports, which helps you persist in the sport and make you improve significantly as well(This is a run-on sentence). That is why team sports are superior to individual sports.
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Daphna
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