Drive safely

Nowadays many young drivers are involved in a lot of accidents. Statistically every driver under the age of 19 will be involved in an accident in the first two years since he got his driver's license. Numerous accidents caused (by) young drivers are mostly deadly.

The age of getting a driver's license these days is 17. Accordingly, the youth get their driver's license at about the same age. An organization of accident victims has recently proposed that the age for getting a driver's license should be raised to 19. I believe that this proposal will help to reduce the amount of accidents involving youngsters occurring these days.

The suggestion that (the) age of getting a driver's license should be raised to 19 has many advantages. Scientifically speaking, at the age of 19 people has(gr.) better judgment and are less effected by peer pressure. Accordingly, the amount of accidents would be drastically decreased.(You need additional arguments to make your point. )

In conclusion I believe that the age of getting a driver's license should be raised. I think it is a very wise and important thing to do, (new sentence) ideally the paved road will be a safe place again for people to use and cross by(phr.).

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Daphna

The internet revolution

The internet is an invention that changed our lives. All over the world this invention is uses(gr.) by many people, creating a virtual small global village. Obviously, it has a huge meaning in our lives, because we use it for almost everything, studying, reading, and even for our spare time activities, such as computer games.

The internet has many advantages such as, helping people transfer information within seconds all over the world. The internet also helps people communicate and get information in the most efficient and quick way.

In spite of these advantages, the internet has many disadvantages as well. While using the internet you don't have to be identified, meaning you can stay anonymous .This has caused the youth to do as they pleased(gr.). for example, using verbal violence on each other without suffering the consequences.

In conclusion, even though the internet has many disadvantages, I believe that this invention changed our lives for the better. It is true that unsupervised youth can use this invention for false purposes, but in my opinion, a good education can solve it.

Very good work.

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Daphna